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Zmeisss
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Dec 17 2011, 05:58 PM
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Там, в краю русалок и Снежных К.,
где дождь льет так сильно, что образует порой сугробы,
Юная Ханна, налив котам молока,
Выбегает в ветер, на улицу, в зиму, чтобы

Просто взглянуть, укрыв от воды глаза,
Как холодные звезды, сквозь облака мигая,
наблюдают спокойно за городом, птицами, за
Тем, как юная Герда целует юного Кая.

Нет, Ханне не нужно птиц и не нужно звезд,
И зима юной Ханне вообще не нужна ни разу,
Нужен рыцарь (лошадь, меч и огромный рост)
Или хоть просто кто-то голубоглазый.

А у них посмотри: любовь, зеркала дрожат,
Будто земля свои распахнула недра,
И из них в лицо пылает и брызжет ад:
Так юного Кая целует юная Герда.

Ханна вяжет и шьет, романтика домоседства,
Кормит котов, имеет клетчатый плед,
Бедное сердце! О ледяное сердце! 
Как ты умеешь биться в семнадцать лет!

Ханна следит, а время идет, дождь по капле
Бьется вдребезги, с тонких ресниц стекая,
Голубоглазый рыцарь вернется вряд ли,
Юная Герда не отыщет юного Кая,
Она никогда не отыщет Кая.
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post Root
Dec 19 2011, 05:51 PM
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В восхищении! Разве что немного непонятно употребление ада в данном случае и смущает пауза после слова "за" во второй строфе.


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Zmeisss
Dec 19 2011, 06:35 PM
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Это называется анбажеман, кстати. Че смущает?
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Dec 20 2011, 08:50 AM
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Именно пауза. "За тем" привычнее слитно читать, а тут не получается. Я не знал, что это так называется) Спасибо!


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